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She moves like poetry,
smooth and surprising,
with articulate grace.

She whispers like rain,
cool and clear,
with gentle sincerity.

She smiles like chocolate,
warm and wistful,
with implacable understanding.

She cries like alcohol,
metallic and mysterious,
with devastating poignancy.

She sleeps like blood,
heavy and heated,
with dark bitter-sweetness.
©2006-2009 ~noiamnot
:iconnoiamnot:

Author's Comments

I seriously don't know.
I wrote this with nobody in mind.
She's not me, and I don't think I want to be her.
Or maybe I'm wrong.
It doesn't seem finished, but I couldn't think of anything else to write, especially since I didn't know what the hell I was on about.
I worry myself sometimes.

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:iconkahlia:
Worry not, my dear. Nice metaphors. :)

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“Avoid the world, it's just a lot of dust and drag and means nothing in the end.”

-Kerouac
:iconelectrobaby:
She cries like alcohol, beautiful line!

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Check out MSI's new EP--"Another Mindless Rip Off"!!!IT'S AWESOME!!!Listen to Born to Be Beheaded-[link]
:icondagoatmaster:
Brilliant, brilliant, BRILLIANT. Excellent!

I love your use of similes, very effective.

Absolute fave.

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g = a ^ u

:glomp:
:iconkittytsukasa:
WOW! that is so cool!

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Vos estis furcifer!

"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
:iconnoiamnot:
Thanks :)

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconnoiamnot:
:) thanks!

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconnoiamnot:
:D

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconnoiamnot:
:) thanks, I'm glad you think so.

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:icondagoatmaster:
:hug: I love it. Awesome.

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g = a ^ u

:glomp:

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