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Taking Time Takes Time by ~noiamnot:iconnoiamnot:



Step into my eyes –
do you feel the light?
Does my love warm you,
infuse your cold marble flesh
with precious heat,
with passion?

Are you lonely tonight
without my eyes to
engulf you?
Do you miss their caress,
so tender and deep?
Do you miss falling
so softly into me?

Do you miss that
like I  miss you unwrapping me
like a box of chocolates
so slow and sensuous...

The unequalled taste of you,
your tantalizing scent…
my ultimate aphrodisiac.
©2007-2009 ~noiamnot
:iconnoiamnot:

Author's Comments

8/3/07.
Edited heavily to remove the TMI factor :)
I haven't been writing much lately so I thought I'd better submit something to let you all know I'm still alive!

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:icondagoatmaster:
I've said it before, and I'll no doubt say it again: You two are SO adorable.

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g = a ^ u

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:iconabundantamenities:
Do you miss that
like I miss you unwrapping me
like a box of chocolates
so slow and sensuous...


can't say im not disappointed in this bit. (watch your spacing! you added two instead of one there) but your other stuff is so original, and this...cliché. i've heard it before!
to be honest i was surprised you put it in.

other than that, the rest is great. i love it.

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
:iconnoiamnot:
:D

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconnoiamnot:
I wasn't allowed to edit this (bf, heh) and it probably makes more sense and is better with the rest of the poem... but I see what you mean. Thanks for being honest!

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconabundantamenities:
not a problem, glad you appreciate it lol.
smack your bf for me. (NOT SPANK!) well, do that if you want, just don't tell me about it ;)

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This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang, but a whimper
:iconsoulpaste:
yummy. :+fav:

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Today is a think-tank to live for tomorrow.
:iconnoiamnot:
LOL!... 'Kay... :P

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconnoiamnot:
:O_o:
My bf says that.

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconsoulpaste:
lol =D

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Today is a think-tank to live for tomorrow.

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