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I Forgot the Marshmallows by ~noiamnot:iconnoiamnot:



Fran-tic-tock-ness spurs on emotive emotion
Falling for phrases and keep staring into your sky-coffee eyes, all hot and sweet and strong and blue
Snap-flash and hey-you
Blurry dark square and ghosts pulling faces from shadows that weren’t there before
Rage caught with light and boxed oh-so-neatly

Ricocheted all over a map of the sleeping solar system
till elbows connect and spiraling jolts smack into your eyes
Sighing in several different directions
spraying footsteps in the before-midnight colors

Hot spots and cold dots
Meaningless secrets juggled between laughter and explosions
wishing numbers were smaller than currency

Sometimes I wish it didn’t make sense in my head
but we’d be opposite polar poles then,
and I hate the cold when I’m alone.
©2007-2009 ~noiamnot
:iconnoiamnot:

Author's Comments

13/5/07

Abstract, obtuse funness. A whole bunch of events and ideas squished into the white dA submission form.

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:iconwebhermit:
You've done an wonderful job of binding all of this interesting imagery together in a form that is just cohesive enough. I especially love your adventurous use of percussive diction. Great job and fun to read!
:iconnoiamnot:
Thank you very much for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconivyxenaxxe:
"Sighing in several different directions"

Amazing to say the very least.
You truly are an inspiration.

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-- Ivyxen[Axxe] : The Harlequin Heroine --
:iconnoiamnot:
:glomp: thankyou for your kind words and all the faves and the watch!

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"A maiden running from a Prince?...
Does that make sense?!"
:iconivyxenaxxe:
Haha. No problem!
You deserve it!

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-- Ivyxen[Axxe] : The Harlequin Heroine --
:iconfalse-like-tv:
:)

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wherever i go she goes..

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